19/25 I feel like I'm nit-picking here to stop you getting into the top grade boundary. I'll start with the positives though. Your contents page is spot on, totally convincing aside from the pictures. They are not bad, but they could be taken a little more carefully. If the cover was as good as the content I would be giving this 21.
There are a huge number of positive elements on the cover. The sell likes are spot on and the idea for the image is also very good. I like the way that you used bricolage (a collage of found images) to support your original photography, but you have to be utterly convincing with your editing to make that work.
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ReplyDeleteI feel like I'm nit-picking here to stop you getting into the top grade boundary. I'll start with the positives though. Your contents page is spot on, totally convincing aside from the pictures. They are not bad, but they could be taken a little more carefully. If the cover was as good as the content I would be giving this 21.
There are a huge number of positive elements on the cover. The sell likes are spot on and the idea for the image is also very good. I like the way that you used bricolage (a collage of found images) to support your original photography, but you have to be utterly convincing with your editing to make that work.
A solid attempt. Well done.